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Motivation letter

Mon Dec 8, 2008, 1:25 PM
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As some of you may know I'm planning on studying in GB next year, so I had some documents to prepare these days and one of the most important ones, I think, is the motivation letter. If you could spend few minutes and tell your opinion I will greatly appreciate it! There it is:

My name is Simeon Boytchev Patarozliev and I will be a graduate from French language high school in the name of Alfons de Lamartin in Sofia in May 2009. During the last year at school every student is facing a very important choice concerning the future, trying to answer a lot of questions on his mind, feeling lots of hesitations about the most eligible field of realization.
But actually, I don’t see any difficulty in making my choice, because I have been long convinced what exactly I would like to do in my life. This choice has been made long ago, ever since my childhood and was never changed until the present moment.
The first time a placed myself in front of the computer was when I was 5 years old and forever after I have considered it as my friend, collaborator and hand. Like every other child I started with elementary games but later I was interested in the Role Playing Games (RPG) feeling a subconscious admiration towards those who created them. I was wondering how deep a fantasy one must possess to be able to create something like this! Gradually I made the transition form the games towards the programs, which enabled their creation, beginning with the easiest one – Photoshop – and continuing with 3D software - Cinema 4D and 3D Studio Max. I was able to improve the competence acquired by doing teamwork as a designer at an Advertising agency during the summer of 2008 where I learned a lot about meeting terms, etc.
Though I have been rather involved with computers I do not fell an obsession. Like every normal teenager I have always been fond of sports and I still cannot accept the situation when children spend about 90% of their free time in front of the computer. I have never really supported such an idea and passed a very pleasant and varying childhood. The first sport that influenced the formation of my personality was cycling. After one year and a half passed in training I was able to learn a lot about the surrounding world and myself. The continuous training periods including daily runs of 100 km among quiet and beautiful nature gave me the opportunity to do a lot of thinking. Besides the will shown and the discipline required team spirit is very important feature, particularly when you are aiding your teammate to win.
I adore nature and it is inspiring me to be interested in philosophy, which on its side helped me structure a non-standard view on the world. The exceeding completeness and the unbelievable beauty of nature are for me the richest pool of ideas and a source for the flight of my fantasy.
I am convinced that I could be efficient, useful and successful only if I work what I want to do and it gives me pleasure. This is why I decided to put my hobby and competence together and try to fulfill my future that way!
Hi-techs, motion, adoration of beauty and fantasy are the things, which helped me making my choice. For me Computer animation makes all them act simultaneously and fruitfully.
Why Great Britain and why your University?
Everybody knows that Great Britain is the country with the highest level and quality of academic knowledge. My choice of your University was made after studying a lot of information at the Internet, discussions held with consultants, the presentation at the 9th International Show after the project “World Education” in Sofia as well as contacts with young people studying there or having already graduated.

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:iconanimeone:
Thank you, Siath! (If you find any mistakes tell me :P)

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:iconchokalattegirl:
That's really good :)

The only typing error that bugged me was "I do not fell an obsession", should say 'feel'

I hope that you get in!

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:iconanimeone:
Thanks, Thash... I suppose I should hope too. But honestly I have to know not to hope :P

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:iconanimeone:
Tash* - damn I hate it when I type with that kind of mistakes, sorry!

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:iconuntitledspy:
I'm thinking instead of "after studying a lot of information at the Internet" maybe use the word 'through' or 'on' rather then 'at'.
"At the internet" doesn't sound right. :plotting: Otherwise an awesome letter! Great job Simeon! I hope you get in. ;p

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:iconanimeone:
Thanks, US! :)

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